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Any Poets here?

share some of your work

December 23, 2011

11 Comments • Newest first

Ramunesun

[quote=iLoveJesters]I'm more of a "take black and white pictures of everything I see and call it deep" kinda-guy.[/quote]

oh hey me too
I am also a pioneer of avant-garde music and visual art.

Reply December 23, 2011
Sleepyx714

[quote=Ramunesun]ok here we go

Needy
Direct sensory injection
Reckless pleasure without reflection
But reaching the dichotomous point of inflection
Grief washes over; bodily rejection
Withdrawal starts now, pressure from outside
Nerves snap all at once, the mouth cannot cry
Eyelids shift down, up my face wrinkles crawl
Limbs all outstretched, aches and pains to forestall
Head nodding forward, my veins now are narrowin'
I need, I need, can't live without my heroine[/quote]

Marry me.

Reply December 23, 2011
iLoveJesters

I'm more of a "take black and white pictures of everything I see and call it deep" kinda-guy.

Reply December 23, 2011
MeshMage

I live today
How about the next?
My life spun by
Felt like sex.

The train choo'ed past
I woke up in fear
My life was not over
It was not near.

It had just begun
The time of terror
Destroying lives of innocence
No thanks to my carer.

I searched high
I searched low
No saviour was found
No man on show.

The highlight of my life
I became the one
To be the sacrifice for them
My life was fun.

Until this day
You never see
What I've become..
Become of me.

Grotesque figures run
My mind snaps
I do not know
Just receiving slaps

My mind has gone
You just don't see it
I've become nothing
Until candles are lit

My ghastly look
Shocking you dearly
Your soulless eyes
Show merely.

Unintentionally I kill you
What you see now
Is nothing but me
You wonder, "how?"

But that lasts short
You lose your mind
You cry in pain
I'm not kind.

When you finish reading
Please run off
I will hurt you...
Run and do not scoff.

Reply December 23, 2011 - edited
Blumsie

@Ramunesun: Yeah, your intentions seemed pretty obvious. It was sarcasm.

Reply December 23, 2011 - edited
Ramunesun

[quote=Blumsie]heroin*[/quote]

misspelling was intentional
Just to add a whole 'nother level of angst

Reply December 23, 2011 - edited
icalvin123

You aren't going to find poets on basil.

Reply December 23, 2011 - edited
Blumsie

[quote=Ramunesun]ok here we go

Needy
Direct sensory injection
Reckless pleasure without reflection
But reaching the dichotomous point of inflection
Grief washes over; bodily rejection
Withdrawal starts now, pressure from outside
Nerves snap all at once, the mouth cannot cry
Eyelids shift down, up my face wrinkles crawl
Limbs all outstretched, aches and pains to forestall
Head nodding forward, my veins now are narrowin'
I need, I need, can't live without my heroine[/quote]

heroin*

Reply December 23, 2011 - edited
Ramunesun

ok here we go

Needy
Direct sensory injection
Reckless pleasure without reflection
But reaching the dichotomous point of inflection
Grief washes over; bodily rejection
Withdrawal starts now, pressure from outside
Nerves snap all at once, the mouth cannot cry
Eyelids shift down, up my face wrinkles crawl
Limbs all outstretched, aches and pains to forestall
Head nodding forward, my veins now are narrowin'
I need, I need, can't live without my heroine

Reply December 23, 2011 - edited
lilseventeen

The poems I write don't rhyme.
I dislike sharing things that I haven't even written.
I largely compose in my head and forget right before I fall asleep.
Most are personal reflections, actually.
This is kind of a poem.

Look at that. Poem format:
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Reply December 23, 2011 - edited
korweaBOO

xmas.
my mom told me to wrap the christmas presents.
but i'm not a rapper.

Reply December 23, 2011 - edited