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looks so cool good job

Real

ah the hair. about that. i used bannedstory to make the little characters and sometimes they have hair that isn't released in GMS yet.
and i really should draw something more maple related. i'm thinking of drawing orchid later if i'm not busy ^_^ (i'll take the advice and do it in pencil first =n= )

[quote=courtlandsr]i see that alot if u got a girl char everyone loves what you drew and if you got a guy char they bag on it.... sexist basil[/quote]

I think it's more of "if the drawing is good or not." Remember @DruidMight? @FlaminQuincy? @GenuineLaughter? @jimmyjxia? @KazePickle? @MerchantJuju, @vanilla and @Pedrof1990, too. Everyone's favorite @lilzara uses a male avatar as well, even though she's a girl. So I don't really think the gender of the in-game avatar has to do with anything, but rather if people like the drawing or not.

DAT HAIR <3 <3 <3

-instant like-

Ohh teresa, I always buy a heart from your shop

I appreciate the lovely comments and very helpful critiques ^^ i'll work hard.~

Roy Mustang's hair~

The way you did the shading is beautiful, especially for the hair. Yes, the lines for the hair and face communicate a lovely crisp look.

If you don't mind, I also have some constructive criticism.
The arms look a bit odd and the torso also looks a bit too long.
Due to the elongated torso it looks like the right arm is too short. It should be around the middle of the waist.
There is also something about the left arm - this arm should be longer so it ends half way down the thigh. For it to touch the pocket it would need to be bent.
The palm on the right hand shouldn't have a curved bottom line. It should be curved a bit more towards the side of the thumb near the bottom.
Again with the right arm... Maybe add a curved line on the forearm so the arm isn't too straight and unnatural? Adding a bit of fat makes limbs have form.
I'm not very experienced with clothing creases yet, but I just want to remind you that only include them if and when necessary. They are a nice detail, like you have drawn, but in reality creases are formed with movement. If the shirt is loose on the torso then it is OK to leave some out.

There may be other inaccuracies, but overall you've produced a lovely drawing!

Hey Teresa! Nice Drawing Looks soo innocent.

Wow, looks weird but in a good way

@Construct That's sort of true but this style of art is more anime than realistic; In anime wrists aren't really emphasized. Since those are the hands and arms of a "little girl" its kind of understandable why the wrist wouldn't show.

dat face.

Not trying to be Simon Cowell here but the paportions are off :
1) The head is too big.
2) The body is too small.
3) The neck is that of a 16 year old.
4) The eyes are too spread apart.
5) The arms/hands are that of a little girl, so soft. o.o
6) The right arm is misplaced, looks broken.
7) The legs are way too skinny. Helpful advice ( The thighs should be equivalent if not bigger than the neck. )
Not trying too be mean; I draw much worst.
Your shading is fine and clothe wrinkles are good but I suggest next time you pencil before you pen your art

Where did he get the heart?

I love how you did the face and hair~

i see that alot if u got a girl char everyone loves what you drew and if you got a guy char they bag on it.... sexist basil

really really like your style. good work.

omg twinies^
i really like how you shade <3

I like the face, chill photo