Hi guys, this is my first animation ever! So I made it short and just a simple fight. Feedback is welcome and I hope you guys liked it! ^.^
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O60sl5i0E4A
September 10, 2011
Hi guys, this is my first animation ever! So I made it short and just a simple fight. Feedback is welcome and I hope you guys liked it! ^.^
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O60sl5i0E4A
9 Comments • Newest first
[quote=Bluerune137]Omg love it make more please [/quote]
I will try! Not sure when it will be ready. I haven't even started a new project, for now I'm just chilling.
[quote=antisora99]u know ur f(BEEP)cked when u verse some1 with a hacked stonetooth sword
great job btw [/quote]
That made me laugh! And thank you.
Off-Topic: Weird, I got a strong deja vu feeling right now.
u know ur f(BEEP)cked when u verse some1 with a hacked stonetooth sword
great job btw
Thanks guys. I sure will try to improve the next time!
@Oscuuz: I'll try to do a better job with sound effects too. I messed up at some parts. I'm glad you liked.
I really loved the little sound effects you added in; for example the sound when the throwing stars hit the ground.
Awesome for a first one. Keep 'em coming!
Your skill animation were very precise, and Dark Impaler + Phantom Blow and a Freeze Stance wall? Wow, very creative!
Improvements:
-Use facial expressions.
-Usage of speech bubbles would be better. (and imo, use a different font & smaller size)
-Story was crappy.
-The characters were mostly on the ground. Make go around the screen more.
-The Freeze Stance wall could've exploded when the bad guy implanted Dark Flare. Just having it disappear was a letdown.
Great for a first try! Keep it up! 6.5/10.
@battleox288: Aw thank you. This boosts my ego to go on trying to make a better and more polished fight with a longer duration as well.
Honestly, one of best ones i've seen. Clean moves, and loved the change from dark impaler to phantom blow. Also loved how you use the Aran Stance skill (Forgot name) as a shield. Very creative.
Thanks guys! I'm glad you liked! <3
[quote=punkgx1]the story seems so cliche...and then he says he is the crystal? wat the heck?[/quote]
It's cliche because I didn't work on it. I just wanted to make them fight, at first was planning to go deep on the story and I had a cool lore in mind to back it up but then I was like: "Oh, screw it, I'll just make them fight o.o" hahaha.
[quote=Disquised]I love the animations and very well done for a beginner. You might want to watch for grammar although I am not a grammar snob. I just want you not to flamed or trolled about it so @0:55 when it says "Its's" should be "It's" or "It is". Good Video +1 Like.[/quote]
Oh my God, thanks for pointing that out. I didn't notice it for some reason.
I love the animations and very well done for a beginner. You might want to watch for grammar although I am not a grammar snob. I just want you not to flamed or trolled about it so @0:55 when it says "Its's" should be "It's" or "It is". Good Video +1 Like.