A Epic Story soon to be series So me my sis and our bfs made this extremely epic story err kinda well most of our friends liked it xD And as writers, we need some opinions more than from friends (Because they could just be "polite" for all we know it lmao). We need opinions and criticism please! We are also planning to make this into a YouTube series and probably going to contact Michelle (xPwahaha creator of Khaini Series and Sovereign) to help us since we adore her work <3 Also to all the children who think this is a Keylogger or Virus please leave it's in a PDF file and if you are still that paranoid feel free to scan it. Or if you are extremely paranoid just don't download it and read off the comments to see what happened x