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High Fantasy Maple Fanfic Looking for critiques and such on this fanfic. I'm trying to get into writing more frequently and would like some constructive feedback. [b]The other chapters are all available. There are drop down menus and "next" buttons on the right, both above and below the text.[/b] The buttons below the synopsis may also be used to manipulate the size, spread, and font of the text however you please to make it easier or more comfortable to read. EDIT: I nearly forgot two crucial creative changes I made that may confuse readers that are also avid players. Ludibrium was renamed to Temporis ("Ludibrium" is from the Latin for "Play," fitting very much with the theme it plays in the game. However, for

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Does anyone here ...read Maple fanfiction? I have a completed ~22k word novella based in the Maple universe that I'd post here if anyone was interested. It's a high fantasy spin on Maple, so things aren't cartoon-y and cute, they're huge and menacing and fairly grim. EDIT: Would potential readers prefer I posted all the chapters here, or simply linked to my already uploaded and organized version on Fanfiction.net? EDIT2: I'll just leave the link here, and anyone interested can read it. Any and all comments and criticisms are welcome. This is just chapter one. The other chapters can easily be navigated to with the drop-down menu or by clicking "next chapter." The story follows a bowman who has taken a contract to travel with strang