Digital Cubist Inspired Collage V2
I posted an early version of this before and have since tweaked it. I'm looking for opinions now, things like what's working or what isn't, do you like it or dislike and for what reason and etc.
Enjoy http://imgur.com/mzTuXnD
March 16, 2015
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@TeenyRikku No this is definitely being submitted for a grade haha. The assignment has a lot of freedom aside from the requirement that you incorporate the premise for it.
These are professional examples of what she is looking for http://imgur.com/pS9HydT http://imgur.com/XfAHtFr
This is what I had before http://imgur.com/eEduUbK She said that the composition and premise as a whole had good potential and that she like what I was doing with the colors and what not. So I made the changes she recommended to what it is now.
Which shapes exactly are you referring to when you say to accentuate them? I can understand the critique but there are so shapes that I don't really know which one's you are referring to. Also what aren't you feeling about the color scheme?
...didn't know anime cubism existed.
Anyway, I think you could make the shapes more present, like I didn't even see the shapes until I zoomed in. Also, don't be afraid to use different colors. Is this an assignment or something you're doing for fun? =o
@Anthorix I can't tell if you're being sarcastic or not, but assuming you aren't that isn't the purpose of the project. We were assigned to make a contemporary piece inspired by the cubist style. Adding depth using simple shapes and etcetera. At this point I just want to know if people like it or if there are things that they feel could be changed.
i think yur supposed to make things out of cubes...