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Help with female point of view critique request Um, yeah... I need a few recommendations on good literature to read that epitomizes the female outlook on the world so that I can write a short story with a female lead. I'd prefer some first person point of view stories, but well done limited third person is also welcome. ------ On another note... I'd like some criticism on a short story I wrote based on my favorite poem, [url=http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-rain-was-ending-and-light/]"The Rain Was Ending, and Light" by Laurence Binyon.[/url] For now let's just say that Mr.Binyon developed the story and I transcribed it. Anything but too cliched will do. ---- Rain was rare in the town; in fact it had been almost twenty years sinc