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I'm new at making comics and I wanted to make one for a long time, so here it is. This chapter is kinda boring but chapter.2 will be good

Criticism welcome
-- because I need to improve my comic --

...........It's not that bad......is it?

November 3, 2010

11 Comments • Newest first

mrweixu

This has nothing to do with the manga DNAngle

Reply November 6, 2010
arkrana

Guy eyes.

Reply November 6, 2010
Crazy190

This kind of reminds me of DNAngel

Reply November 4, 2010
mrweixu

OK D: SRY SRY. JEEZ. I'll change them into girls eyes next time.......I was just rushing.....lol.

I'll change them in chpt.3 because i already submitted chpt.2 with lots of fail editing LOL

And no, she's not a G.I.R.L

Reply November 3, 2010
PitchuXD

Dude eyes fail!

Reply November 3, 2010
3xdex

Guy eyes? And doesn't white eyes=blind? o_o

Reply November 3, 2010
GraveJokerR

[quote=Maragidyne]It's a trap![/quote]

Our cruisers cant repel firepower of that magnitude!

~Admineral Akbar XD

Reply November 3, 2010
donlolme

First thing that came to mind: G.I.R.L.

Reply November 3, 2010
QuickBowmen

Change her eyes please, those are male..

Reply November 3, 2010