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I'm new in making comics........so criticize please! So I can improve.

Made with MSpaint and bannedstory.

Like if you like it

November 3, 2010

7 Comments • Newest first

3xdex

[quote=hyperfreak]if you read one of his comments about the last comic he said he already made comic 2 and said he would fix it in the 3rd issue[/quote]

Sorry, I don't recheck comments, unless I get quoted. ><.

Reply November 10, 2010
hyperfreak

[quote=3xdex]You didn't listen to what everyone said last time about the girl eyes, so why ask for critiques? And are they going to do naughty stuff to her..?[/quote]

if you read one of his comments about the last comic he said he already made comic 2 and said he would fix it in the 3rd issue

Reply November 4, 2010
3xdex

You didn't listen to what everyone said last time about the girl eyes, so why ask for critiques? And are they going to do naughty stuff to her..?

Reply November 4, 2010
WebSurfer09

[quote=Crazy190]Now it reminds me of 99% of the basil comics that btw doesn't usually get past the 5th or so page.[/quote]
I agree.

Also, try editing it using a higher end image editor (like Gimp or Paint.Net) to reduce the JPEG effect that a lot of comics get when you don't do it right.

Reply November 4, 2010
Crazy190

Now it reminds me of 99% of the basil comics that btw doesn't usually get past the 5th or so page.

Reply November 4, 2010
mrweixu

Yeah, I did ^ and I don't know how to use GIMP >_> lol

Reply November 4, 2010
falzar97x

try editing with gimp. its free and good
are u using bs4? i thnik its pretty good

Reply November 4, 2010