A comic series that i had started in the past but then promptly quit.
I am going to start it again so please enjoy.
Constructive criticism accepted.
February 23, 2011
A comic series that i had started in the past but then promptly quit.
I am going to start it again so please enjoy.
Constructive criticism accepted.
9 Comments • Newest first
For some reason, I really disliked the "ahh. noo." part. I don't think anyone says that with periods... And as was previously mentioned, the action panels seemed kinda extraneous. I hope you make a good reason for the whole black blob thing.
those 6 action clips was totally not needed, add some motion in 1 big panel and you could've added more depth
and try changing the way the character is talking, too generic and lacks any character just going 'oh dam" in one could've changed it.
Panel 11 : I wish.
xD
Uhmm for some reason I've seen this before o-o.
Laws of grammar state that it's "you and me" instead of "you and I".
I dont get what happens at the end.
Forget what everyone else is saying, I liked it and I am interested in your story and what will happen. I hope you will continue.
pretty interesting, looks forward to next one and the dark tranforming thingo
I like it, it's simple and clean.