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Not pointing fingers, it was a good effort but I think more could have been put into this.

[quote=tigerpawner]Make coloring tutorial plzzz :<[/quote]

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[quote=blazi4ever]Although you still have improvement to do via proportions (E.g. The wrist on her hand needs to be a bit more shapely, note that all wrists have that small bump on the facing outside away from the body if hands are placed flat down towards yourself; same goes for the head, just increase the forehead size as well as look off of a reference for their shapes as it's a tad bit difficult for me to explain other than an egg shape), you definitely have improved in colour choices (variety, toning, and saturation) though. My other tid bit of critique is the contrast between shadows and your base colour in some areas (E.g. Pink clothing area + Mir's head), both in value are similar so I suggest going slightly darker for your shadows![/quote]

Make coloring tutorial plzzz :<

@blazi4ever Thanks for your input! I still need to work human anatomy and posing as well as perspective (I want it to look like Evan was looking up at someone/something, but I failed miserably at it). As for the dress (aka the pink clothing you mentioned), it was suppose to be white with a hint of pink-purple, but I had no idea how to pull that one off. I'll probably go back and fix it later, but for now, thank you for your advice, I still have a loooooooooong way to go.
@Nashi Yeah, I have a tablet, it's a WP5540 (Yes, I know, it's not a Wacom. I can't afford it >.&gt
@BladeSoul69 "Female" Evan's eyes are green, according to Nexon's official art.

Auhh Nice ^-^ good job <3 Do you own a graph tablet? o:

Although you still have improvement to do via proportions (E.g. The wrist on her hand needs to be a bit more shapely, note that all wrists have that small bump on the facing outside away from the body if hands are placed flat down towards yourself; same goes for the head, just increase the forehead size as well as look off of a reference for their shapes as it's a tad bit difficult for me to explain other than an egg shape), you definitely have improved in colour choices (variety, toning, and saturation) though. My other tid bit of critique is the contrast between shadows and your base colour in some areas (E.g. Pink clothing area + Mir's head), both in value are similar so I suggest going slightly darker for your shadows!

well, since you worked hard at it, respect deserved.
Pretty good!