Would you add or take away anything from this?
It's a basis for something I'm working on that I haven't colored yet. I wanted to work on it some more before this but I like feedback. It's based on the superflat art movement if that helps.
Enjoy, http://i.imgur.com/BiYhORg.jpg
April 11, 2015
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Just searched up 'superflat' on google and it seems to use a lot of geometric shapes. yours looks a tad too organic. Use one overall, simple shape, then add smaller geometric detail within that shape.
@krishman http://s3.amazonaws.com/com.artwelove.asset/197b25e6e775fbf1ac5c980eae404c9e-m.jpg https://www.withfriendship.com/images/j/45003/sciphone-s18-super-flat-touch.jpg
I've been borrowing more from these types of works as opposed to Murakami's stuff. I should've elaborated that the purpose is to take the aspects of an art movement and put our own spin on it. I understand your points and will keep them in mind.
Superflat is sort of sinister looking cute things, which is what youve got. The style doesn't remind me superflat at all past that tho. Everything else needs be rounder with the odd sharp lines to contrast. Also can't say much since theres no colour on it. I would take out the person on the right tho, focus on multiple weird bunny things.
Is that thing in the middle holding someone's hand? if that's so I would work on the hand to make it look like a hand. (nothing ruins a picture more than when a hand is drawn poorly) </3
A broken doll head lying on its side that fills up the background
I'm not sure what I am looking at.
It seems like a bunny with a sinister smile holding someone's hand with a broken egg in the background.