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Basil, tell me what to do now.

Hey Basil.
Womanly troubles.
I was missing my ex girl and I was going to mail this letter to her in cutesy wittow hand writing.
And Mail I mean physical paper.
Tell me if it's good!

Dear Cheryl,

Now, it's hard to say I'm sorry.
It's hard to make the things I did undone.
A lesson I've learned too well for sure.
I'm trying to figure out just what to do.
I'm going crazy without you.

I remember the way you used to look at me and say "promises never last forever"
I told you not to worry
I said everthing would be all right
I didn't know then that you were right

And this may seem hard to believe, but
you're all I ever wanted.
You're all I ever needed.
So tell me what to do now,
when I want. you. back.

Sincerely,
Jason

Help me out Basil!

August 22, 2011

12 Comments • Newest first

BladeLust

Okay...why are you ripping off old song lyrics from your love letter? It has to be in your own words or it's meaningless.
If you haven't seen her for awhile and just mail this letter out of nowhere, it's coming off as creepy stalker guy to me.

Reply August 22, 2011
ShadyAce

loooool

Reply August 22, 2011
Lmafroggy

I'm a guy and got love notes earlier this year and boy was it creepy
She's your EX for a reason if it didn't work out the first time I really think you shouldn't try it again...
Besides why don't you tell her face to face you want her back?

Reply August 22, 2011
LordZubin

[quote=MenageATrois]Your poem is ok, but you should use mine. I think she'll definitely want you back.

You are my fire
The one desire
Believe when I say
I want it that way

But we are two worlds apart
Can't reach to your heart
When you say
That I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a mistake
Tell me why
I never wanna hear you say
I want it that way

Am I your fire
Your one desire
Yes I know it's too late
But I want it that way

Now I can see that we're falling apart
From the way that it used to be, yeah
No matter the distance
I want you to know
That deep down inside of me...

You are my fire
The one desire
You are
You are, you are, you are

Don't wanna hear you say
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Ain't nothin' but a mistake
(Don't wanna hear you say)
I never wanna hear you say
I want it that way

Tell me why
Ain't nothin' but a heartache
Tell me why
Ain't nothin but a mistake
Tell me why
I never wanna hear you say
(Don't wanna hear you say it)
I want it that way
I want it that way[/quote]

I read the first four lines and I was like "Lolwut..."

Reply August 22, 2011
ChicagoHatesYou

[quote=Everlong]Lol, Nsync.
I started singing the rest of the song in my head after I read the first line.[/quote]

Thank you!
Is everyone really too young that they don't remember this?

Reply August 22, 2011
FaTaLP3NGU1N

[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ns776JVGyIc]Try sending this one by email...[/url]

Reply August 22, 2011
MrDelp

Be a Man brah.
Do it face to face.

And try not to laugh.

Reply August 22, 2011
cutie

I say go for it.
And I wish you best of luck! (:

Reply August 22, 2011 - edited
Everlong

Lol, Nsync.
I started singing the rest of the song in my head after I read the first line.

Reply August 22, 2011 - edited
Perth

I don't think you should.

Reply August 22, 2011 - edited
eskmoo

Cool story bruh, needs more dragons and death.

Reply August 22, 2011 - edited
ChicagoHatesYou

[quote=xElectraa]"I was going to mail this letter to her in cutesy wittow hand writing."
i dont even need to read the actual poem.
go and ride your scooter.[/quote]

Has anyone ever loved you?

Reply August 22, 2011 - edited