So i started this piece a few days ago, its of my girlfriend's char and my char fighting von leon. Still WIP. Any critics out there? ;D
jeisuthezerk.deviantart.com
June 30, 2012
So i started this piece a few days ago, its of my girlfriend's char and my char fighting von leon. Still WIP. Any critics out there? ;D
jeisuthezerk.deviantart.com
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Oh god, if I posted a WIP, I would get too lazy to finish it. Maybe you have more dedication than me but I'd rather see a beautiful finished product than a small portion
[quote=imns]That background effect did a good job at damaging my eyes.[/quote]
Well, not to me my friend. So [b]I[/b] don't see how it is.
Polearm* and Sword.
Beholden look awesome, and I really like how berzerk has random flare movement instead of a symmetrical design.
I see you have combos lightly sketched for the hero. I hope you can add the same style you did on the dark knight, meaning, I'd like to see the combos look different from the game such as different rotation pattern. It also looks like the hero has a combo in his hand like he's applying the orbs to use a skill. Whatever you choose to do, I'll be looking forward to the next post.
looks very promising. but still too early. get it done my friend.
Lovely! Can't wait to see it when it's done.
I noticed that the partisan blade is a bit curved on one end. If you look at the part facing the pink scar you'll see what I mean.
BUSTER SWORDd!
[quote=Mikey8534]Partisan=pole arm? yes?[/quote]
http://www.basilmarket.com/show/item/6309 confirm.
OT: Don't see how it classifys exactly as a "damage" photo o-o
Partisan=pole arm? yes?
Though you titled it "Spear and Sword," our focus is in the middle thanks to the little device you have going on with the streaks. With what you have here, especially with your cleanliness and readability, I'd want to see more of an environment and something that the two characters are challenging. Right now there's a story begging to be told, but then nothing happens. The dynamic point of view is down-- just tell us the story now!
critics i can give: you being unable to see the character's faces.
partisan seems to be lacking some detail (it's also broken on the back*)
the uncolored partisan looks great, only it has a very small handle
beholder is plain awesome.
can't wait to see it finished/colored, i am sure it will be great (really liking most of the coloring)
That partisan was gorgeous <3
Beholden too
Nice +1 like