The Evans when they are grown up.
I must say redesigning mEvan's clothes is probably one of the hardest thing I've ever done, because I don't want to make him looks too similar to Freud. So yeah, ripped off one of the sleeve, cut the coat short and added the old Onyx crest (or something like that, idk).
For fEvan, the design is rather similar, I mostly put her in that dress and done.
Background are Evan's hall of heroes, which is a real pain to get it done.
Time taken: 21,5 hours.
Tool: Paint Tool SAI.
February 11, 2013
21 Comments • Newest first
I feel as though the male needs more forehead -- I know, it's covered by the fringe but it should still be able to be 'seen', imo, kind of like the female's.
[quote=ThanhnuFia]@YouAzle @AlterSniper
Look, I'm cool if you people pointing out the mistakes I made, but don't do it to the point that you're making fun of my work. If you don't have anything better to say, don't say anything at all.[/quote]
gosh take it easy, i actually like it. Its colorful and vibrant. Looks like a great poster...so defensive, just joking around. but the eyes DO look like andy from fatal fury
It's a well drawn piece, good job.
And to those 'critiquing' her work, there are obviously some things she could fix, but there's no need to point each and every one of them out. It also wouldnt hurt to word things a little nicer.. she obviously put a lot of effort into this drawing. Every drawing will have its flaws, and they will only be improved upon with time and dedication.
Very nice!
The facial expressions are amazing! But the wand female Evan is holding looks like it's floating in air. o.o And the wrinkles on female Evan's dress are not drawn in the right places. But really nice job! (:
I think the previous poster when they mentioned that you should be able to see his fingers meant that you should be staring right at his fingers like when you look at a fist about to punch you. Basically the angle is a bit too extreme to be comfortable and probably wouldn't be bending his hand that much. I would draw an example for you but seeing as its super late here for me and i have to get up in a few hours... maybe tomorrow;;
But overall I enjoyed your design! and I think the color choices were nice and didn't clash too much so that the whole picture looks quite cohesive
@YouAzle @AlterSniper
Look, I'm cool if you people pointing out the mistakes I made, but don't do it to the point that you're making fun of my work. If you don't have anything better to say, don't say anything at all.
Looks good!
[quote=MisterWho]Is anyone mentally disturbed by the male evan's eye proportion? It's weird to even look at from a distance.[/quote]
look up "Andy from Fatal fury", looks just like that
Is anyone mentally disturbed by the male evan's eye proportion? It's weird to even look at from a distance.
[quote=fun2killu]awkward position of the man's left hand. We should be able to see the man's fingers.[/quote]
mir or some dragon mauled it, now its diformed
I like it. I thought you did a good job with shading. If I could color half as good as you, I'd be so happy.
I think this picture is pretty nice(:
Only things that set me off are how the male Evan eyes are maybe a bit too high? It could just be me
And the male Evan, the arm he's holding the staff, the forearm looks just a TINY bit too long.
@fun2killu I understand what you're trying to say. You meant his palm should be visible instead of the back of his hand, right ? But the way he is holding the staff doesn't seem uncomfortable or awkward at all.
@Yokomuri My bad, when I added the ray of lights in I didn't notice it covered m!Evan's symbol on his hand. As for the symbol on his crest (The piece of cloth, idk), it was there since forever, I made no changes to it.
@Doutie @LostMyJob Please don't get any wrong ideas The Evans are adults in the drawing but that doesn't mean they are into each other.
is it inside the coat.. touching... haha.
No were just stating The problems with it not saying its a bad drawing.
Evan Marks Arent on chest or clothes there suppose to be on there hand,And the mans hand Is in a really weird position.
[quote=fun2killu]i meant the other side of his hand should show. Try copying his position, and you will see how awkward and unnatural his hand position is.[/quote]
-looks at girls cape-
>realizes<
[quote=Typhillion]I can see his fingers perfectly.[/quote]
i meant the other side of his hand should show. Try copying his position, and you will see how awkward and unnatural his hand position is.
[quote=fun2killu]awkward position of the man's left hand. We should be able to see the man's fingers.[/quote]
I can see his fingers perfectly.
awkward position of the man's left hand. We should be able to see the man's fingers.