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i wrote a poem how good is it?

Now this is the story all about how
My life got flipped, turned upside down
And I'd like to take a minute just sit right there
I'll tell you how I became the tlhz'jq of a town called Tenochtitlan

In west Tlacopan born and raised
On the ulama where I spent most of my days
Chilling out, maxing, relaxing all cool
And all shooting some tlachtli outside of the school. When a couple of conquistadors, they were up to no good. Started making trouble in my tlocolz'mi
I got in one little fight and my chthulu got scared
And said "You're moving with your tloc and tloci in Tenochtitlan "

I whistled for a paynani and when it came near
he said " huipil" and had a Ahuitzotl in the back
If anything I could say that this paynani was rare
But I thought nah, forget it, yo pīpiltin to Bel-air!

I pulled up to a hut about 7 or 8
And I yelled to the tlotcic "Yo, hloctol smell you later!"
Looked at my kingdom I was finally there
To sit on my throne as the prince of Tenochtitlan

July 24, 2012

4 Comments • Newest first

will0700

[quote=Kingsleh]This was posted on /8/ literally a minute ago.[/quote]

and guess who posted it.
>2012
>still mad about it

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited
will0700

[quote=WrongSections]Roses are red
Violets are blue
Some poems ryhme
But this one doesnt[/quote]

free verse is coo too

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited
Fiercerain

I miss Will Smith.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVbQo3IOC_A

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited
steven7x23

needs some theme music

[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dRBjND_899U&feature=related]yes[/url]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3qus-O2uGA]okay[/url]

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited