[quote=Liam]she's kind of a butter face; just because the eyes are a little too wide (mostly the right) making the nose much more noticeable..in a bad way. anyways everything's looking incredible, but'er face.[/quote]
you're all right, in my opinion here's what should be fixed : girls should have curvier face, hers is angular, i drew her anime eyes wrong, too much white, and the eyes are too big(actually if i removed the white it would be just right for a shoujo style), also angelic bursters eyes are curved inwards, which is quite unsual for those anime girls with bulging eyes, that was an unconscious mistake. and her mouth should have a subtler outline and smaller smile. i kinda submitted it knowing all that already , so lazy but this is quite an important picture to me cuz i really like her, i guess i'll do a complete redo on her face
thanks everybody
as for the nose.. thats just my style, nothing wrong with it xD and what's wrong with her thighs
I don't think the nose is all that bad actually. It's just the shadow for the nose is what makes it seem strange. The eyes are just a bit off. As is the mouth. It should be more towards your/our left (Angelic Burster's right). Also, and I know that this will probably be a lot of work, but you could redraw it with the mouth moved over and a little less nose shadow, and her left eye (when we see it, the right eye), either trimmed down a bit and moved to our left or just moved left keeping it the same size and such.
Really nice image, but the eyes are a bit odd to me? Mostly the size of the left eye. Edit: Removed what else I had here, I suspect people think I was being a jerk by trying to show what I did, and that wasn't my intention at all, I meant no disrespect.
she's kind of a butter face; just because the eyes are a little too wide (mostly the right) making the nose much more noticeable..in a bad way. anyways everything's looking incredible, but'er face.
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[quote=Liam]she's kind of a butter face;
just because the eyes are a little too wide (mostly the right) making the nose much more noticeable..in a bad way.
anyways everything's looking incredible, but'er face.[/quote]
He has a good point.
Buster*
Kawaii Desu.... Derp
Every time I see this, I think of Gangnam Style for some strange unknown reason O.o...
[quote=MyNamesBrad]The face seems a little off, I think the eyes are to big/wide? O.o[/quote]
It's meant to be like that. The real angelic burster's eyes are messed up too
aWESOME
Do you have a deviant account or something? <3 cuz you are just awesome!
The face looks too flat, but overall it's nice.
This is a prime example of a derp disorder.
As well as butterface.
The eyes are [b]way[/b] too far apart. It's kinda scaring me.
Needs less botox
lolz Janet Jackson went white too..
[quote=guertena]Her costume looks like something that Girl's Generation would wear. [/quote]
That's only for Genie.
OT: I don't think those are shorts because the front looks longer than the back. The pointy boobs is probably the bras.
I don't like the way you drew the face and the type of pink you used. But the details of the clothes are really really nice. Props to you!
Her costume looks like something that Girl's Generation would wear.
Hawt <3
still sensual.
I like the drawing. I really want to make one even if she can be ridiculously OP with funds. She's too cute to resist.
Sigh .... Another Angelic Buster with oversize breasts.....
http://aquariusgine.deviantart.com/art/Angelic-Burster-327507945?ga_submit=10%3A1347913741
ive editted her face, comments plx and thanks
the face and legs need a bit adjusting...
This is cute. Maybe work on the face a little but overall I still think its very well done and colored nicely.
^^
you're all right, in my opinion here's what should be fixed : girls should have curvier face, hers is angular, i drew her anime eyes wrong, too much white, and the eyes are too big(actually if i removed the white it would be just right for a shoujo style), also angelic bursters eyes are curved inwards, which is quite unsual for those anime girls with bulging eyes, that was an unconscious mistake. and her mouth should have a subtler outline and smaller smile. i kinda submitted it knowing all that already , so lazy but this is quite an important picture to me cuz i really like her, i guess i'll do a complete redo on her face
thanks everybody
as for the nose.. thats just my style, nothing wrong with it xD
and what's wrong with her thighs
cool =]
but i would change that nose...
I don't think the nose is all that bad actually. It's just the shadow for the nose is what makes it seem strange. The eyes are just a bit off. As is the mouth. It should be more towards your/our left (Angelic Burster's right). Also, and I know that this will probably be a lot of work, but you could redraw it with the mouth moved over and a little less nose shadow, and her left eye (when we see it, the right eye), either trimmed down a bit and moved to our left or just moved left keeping it the same size and such.
That face is scary.
Reminds me of Sailor Moon
[quote=WorkOfArt]@DwerG
That makes her look so derp[/quote]
That's obviously not how it would look, I just resized what he had to show him what I meant. I thought that was obvious.
@DwerG
That makes her look so derp
OT: How can thighs be so round >.<
Really nice image, but the eyes are a bit odd to me? Mostly the size of the left eye. Edit: Removed what else I had here, I suspect people think I was being a jerk by trying to show what I did, and that wasn't my intention at all, I meant no disrespect.
>Pink Hair
>Black Coat
>Epaulettes
>Shorts
>and a magical girl to boot
Revolutionary Girl Utena?
yeahh, the face looks kind of weird o.o, well other than that the rest is good.
Dat cameltoe..
looks like orca or something...
she's kind of a butter face;
just because the eyes are a little too wide (mostly the right) making the nose much more noticeable..in a bad way.
anyways everything's looking incredible, but'er face.
awesome drawing ;D even tho.. the face somehow reminds me of michael jackson...
The face seems a little off, I think the eyes are to big/wide? O.o
@Above Really? It just reminds me of SNSD's Tell Me Your Wish.
If this is half, I wonder what you think 3/4th is. Good drawing nonetheless.
you can be my captain anytime <3 <3