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Early birthday gift & art trade with my dearest friend Suyain
I feel like I'm improving, and it is a great feeling.
Constructive comments are welcome!

March 10, 2013

24 Comments • Newest first

CygnusFate

oh great now i have ***** thank you just great

Reply March 15, 2013
RedArchery

[quote=aethynyc]It's really nice
Love the mouth. I think the wings should be more defined and less blurry

By the way... what hat is that? The flower crown is not in the CS I think?[/quote]

More like a halo than a blur. And yes it is, my friend actually wears it in-game

Reply March 15, 2013 - edited
aethynyc

It's really nice
Love the mouth. I think the wings should be more defined and less blurry

By the way... what hat is that? The flower crown is not in the CS I think?

Reply March 14, 2013 - edited
xblueskies

I dont know if its just me, but I think you placed the wings a bit too high or maybe like everyone says its too small :x
And the shield looks a bit weird ^^; but overall good job, the bunny's so cute between those thighs O_O;

Reply March 12, 2013 - edited
Styx

Mawie, the coloring and subtle modeling/shading is amazing.
I especially love the hair and that rose headband... that headband is absolutely beautiful. <3

Reply March 11, 2013 - edited
brewskie425

Everything looks great but the face. I think with your talent you could've easily added more detail Great job though. I like the wings

Reply March 11, 2013 - edited
gorffrog

She who must not be named has returned.

Reply March 11, 2013 - edited
sujupwns

wishin i was dat bunny

Reply March 11, 2013 - edited
PureWhiteSky

I spy with my little eyes
a playboy bunny . . .

Reply March 11, 2013 - edited
DeviantCross

All obvious criticisms aside, the tonal shading is superb. Could have just left the background by itself and it would be amazing, but you stacked more amazing sauce.
THE COLORS ARE EXQUISITE~

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
Retrospectus

Not bad.
The background remind me of Oblivion.

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
Zeff

Front page, nice!

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
darkspawn980

@RedArchery: being serious:

i won't mention anything about the nose, as said we don't even have one, and your drawing does well without it.
i love the coloring
the wings are indeed way too small
for some reason i feel the neck is... waaay too large, or the breast are too far down, maybe a bit of both
the demon aegis is weirdly placed if you ask me
that thing with the bell, behind her, has an unnatural feeling to it, like it's held by a wire rather than a normal movement.

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
ClipsNCurls

potato face

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
danathan

[quote=KojoHawk]That's the sexy demon girl, who allures you with her attraction, then kills you when you are sleeping... [/quote]
Your the sexy demon guy

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
SmashDragoon

Honestly, the picture looks good. However, it's kinda a bit awkward in some ways....

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
TheDStar

Wings are like, too small for her...
Oh, I mean...yes.

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
RedArchery

You guys are all so very mature.

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
DjFunky

[quote=cccurrified]It's probably just me, but that is a weird spot to put a rabbit plushie. Imo, wings could be a bit larger, but overall this is good .[/quote]

Wonder where the other ear is...

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
cccurrified

It's probably just me, but that is a weird spot to put a rabbit plushie. Imo, wings could be a bit larger, but overall this is good .

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
silkym39

[quote=DjFunky]Dat nose[/quote]

But no one has a nose on maple.

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
DjFunky

Dat nose

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited
JuiceBoxes

thighs.

Reply March 10, 2013 - edited