I really liked this drawing. Adjust the face to make it higher and remove her ears since she has cat ears already is my opinion. I really like how you did the coloring and dress. -Jelly- I dont know how to color good :c
[quote=Arthenon]Congratulations on being a reason why some artists never improve. Style shouldn't be used as an excuse when there is something off about a drawing. Anime or not it should still obey a few basic rules to avoid looking too "alien" as some other posters have mentioned.
This, this is a good comment.
OT: Hai fork.
Dunno what your work flow is like but remember to keep it simple at first and get the major forms down (in this case, the head) correct before adding the finer lines and color. You have like 3 pages of people telling you somethings off with the head so I won't parrot it again. Next time pay closer attention to the way hair wraps around a head, it looks too thick on the left and that's giving people the impression of its a wig that's about to fall off.[/quote]
Congratulations on trying to be a hero.
Art style. Do you understand what it means? You can be a critic all you want, but if you lack the understanding of style and criticize what's not meant to be criticized you're not helping anyone.
You'd think the artist already knows what his art looks like. Everyones stating it obviously. Are you helping by saying the same thing? No. You're not.
I love your shading and coloring the shaman robe are probably my favorite <3 you did well on the kitty hair but the face & eyes need a little more work
Hey! I dunno if this may help but I drew over your drawing showing a bit more proportional... proportions or at least how I would draw it so it probably isn't 100% accurate Also i drew a space for where the hair thickness usually is [url=http://i.imgur.com/VZMvBrT.jpg]Here![/url] Sorry if this offends you I just want to help ^^
Not being sexual but from the shoulders down (except left is a bit to high), it looks well done but the face has a small long appearance and the nick seems long and the chin... is off... But the hair is well done and most details just needs a little work! keep up the good work!
You did an excellent job on coloring, however your body proportion needs work. Her left shoulder is too high making her arm seem dislocated. Her face is positioned too low for her head and her hair looks as if it were about to fall off. I can see that you are trying to make her look downwards but the posture of the hair and her head makes it seem disproportional. I also suggest to use stronger shading around the neck and chin area or it will look as if her chin is fused with her neck. Other than that, your interpretation of the pink bow is creative, but one can be confused as it does not look like a bow at all. Its not a bad drawing, you just need to tweak things around a little. I see potential in your art, but there is room for improvement
I think the chin is narrowed down a bit too much, making the upper part of the head too large. The eyes should probably be smaller and a little higher.
Necks too long and the face seems kind of weird. Its probably that the face is really small and the eyes are so huge, but compared to the eyes, the mouth is really small. Also the forehead is HUUUUUUUUUUUUGE (lol)
Here's a warning for future posters. Please keep your sexual fantasies to yourself. If not, this drawing will have to be removed due to being too much to handle and that'd be one helluva let down for everybody.
Lol looks like she's purpously squishing her arms together to get some cleave going. Also her face...kind of disturbs me. I can't place my finger on what's wrong with it though. Hmm...
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@Arthenon: Hehe. As if BasilMarket is a place I care about status.
Speaking of which, it's obvious that status is important to you to bring it up so pointlessly. Congratulations, pal.
@Arthenon: TL/DR didn't even read the TL/DR.
Doesn't matter to anyone. I'm not here to say the same thing everyone else is.
I really liked this drawing. Adjust the face to make it higher and remove her ears since she has cat ears already is my opinion. I really like how you did the coloring and dress. -Jelly- I dont know how to color good :c
[quote=Arthenon]Congratulations on being a reason why some artists never improve. Style shouldn't be used as an excuse when there is something off about a drawing. Anime or not it should still obey a few basic rules to avoid looking too "alien" as some other posters have mentioned.
This, this is a good comment.
OT: Hai fork.
Dunno what your work flow is like but remember to keep it simple at first and get the major forms down (in this case, the head) correct before adding the finer lines and color. You have like 3 pages of people telling you somethings off with the head so I won't parrot it again. Next time pay closer attention to the way hair wraps around a head, it looks too thick on the left and that's giving people the impression of its a wig that's about to fall off.[/quote]
Congratulations on trying to be a hero.
Art style. Do you understand what it means? You can be a critic all you want, but if you lack the understanding of style and criticize what's not meant to be criticized you're not helping anyone.
You'd think the artist already knows what his art looks like. Everyones stating it obviously. Are you helping by saying the same thing? No. You're not.
I love your shading and coloring the shaman robe are probably my favorite <3 you did well on the kitty hair but the face & eyes need a little more work
Hey!
I dunno if this may help but I drew over your drawing showing a bit more proportional... proportions
or at least how I would draw it so it probably isn't 100% accurate
Also i drew a space for where the hair thickness usually is
[url=http://i.imgur.com/VZMvBrT.jpg]Here![/url]
Sorry if this offends you I just want to help ^^
Her forehead takes up half her face i swear. Gotta pay attention to the proper proportions man~
You did a great job. I agree with the head part though - it could use a little adjusting.
Other than that it's great
Keep it up!
Not being sexual but from the shoulders down (except left is a bit to high), it looks well done but the face has a small long appearance and the nick seems long and the chin... is off... But the hair is well done and most details just needs a little work! keep up the good work!
You did an excellent job on coloring, however your body proportion needs work. Her left shoulder is too high making her arm seem dislocated. Her face is positioned too low for her head and her hair looks as if it were about to fall off. I can see that you are trying to make her look downwards but the posture of the hair and her head makes it seem disproportional. I also suggest to use stronger shading around the neck and chin area or it will look as if her chin is fused with her neck. Other than that, your interpretation of the pink bow is creative, but one can be confused as it does not look like a bow at all. Its not a bad drawing, you just need to tweak things around a little. I see potential in your art, but there is room for improvement
That bow reminds me of coral...
Overall though, loving the outfit <3
Art style people. I swear everyone wants to be a pro critic.
The head and neck needs work. it just looks very weird.
hair placement looks a bit off, otherwise, looks nice!
The hair looks really nice, but it kind of seems like she's bald and her wig is bout to fall off
[url=http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/155/594/yesitis2.gif]Aliens[/url]
@Shiratsuki: Ribbons and bows look more like [url=http://i.imgur.com/WG2LZw5.jpg?1]this[/url], rather than aliens.
Anyways, the face is placed too low compared to the ears and the hair.
Theres something about the neck and head ratio, but besides that i really think you did a good job.
Since everyone's mentioned what needs improvement, all I can say is that I really adore the eyes and your interpretation of the pious shaman robes.
her flirting position is causing her chin to fuse with her neck
I think the chin is narrowed down a bit too much, making the upper part of the head too large. The eyes should probably be smaller and a little higher.
Don't look at the face, look at the chest.
WOAH. The hair looks like a wig that's about to slip off, but you did good on her chest.
The eyelashes seem to thick to me, still a great drawing.
Necks too long and the face seems kind of weird. Its probably that the face is really small and the eyes are so huge, but compared to the eyes, the mouth is really small.
Also the forehead is HUUUUUUUUUUUUGE (lol)
Other than that this is pretty amazing
Here's a warning for future posters. Please keep your sexual fantasies to yourself. If not, this drawing will have to be removed due to being too much to handle and that'd be one helluva let down for everybody.
She looks like an alien if you shave her head.
Lol looks like she's purpously squishing her arms together to get some cleave going. Also her face...kind of disturbs me. I can't place my finger on what's wrong with it though. Hmm...
derp face
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